By the light of the moon,
an elder tree hangs on a cliff edge, leans into
the abyss, pale roots dislodged from soil, claws
clutch nothing but air. Branches severed by wind,
lightning, rot. What remains unfolds green
to mirror grass and moss-shrouded faces
of boulders it shadows. Twigs twist
back on themselves, tortured positions
that remind me of dark, haunted forests
in The Wizard of Oz. As I approach
my seventieth year, I’m drawn to craggy,
roken trees—trunks debarked, scarred,
smothered with vines. Hollowed ones,
with a gaping hole, mouth a howl of wildness.
~ Inspired by Casper David Friedrich’s Man and Woman Contemplating the Moon, 1824
14 thoughts on "By the light of the moon,"
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Karen – This is just gorgeous! Nice line breaks and attention to detail. Love it when people howl at the moon or trees or just the wild.
Thank you, Sylvia.
Agreed – and I remember the night it began! Linebreaks are so effective and the ending image really sticks with you.
Thanks, Nancy!
“mouth a howl of wildness” – love this ending
Thank you!
Love this, Karen. I also have an affinity for gnarly trees.
That ending hits strong and, like Nancy said, your line breaks work so artfully. I really enjoyed this.
Thanks!
your reference to passing years and its effect on what one sees–so telling.
Thanks!
I feel ya, girl — turning seventy. It sounds pretty apt to me to say “What remains unfolds green . . . .”
Lovely poem about aging, & yes, that last line is gorgeous!
Thank you!