Calendar Squares
On June 1st all thirty calendar squares
mark time, some in dirge mode
shoulders sagging under times
and places, others dance
around exclamation points
knowing their appointments for hours
of infant coos and cuddles are confirmed.
Only few jubilate in hard-won blankness.
How different from summer 2020’s
question marks in each square—
the baby just a scared dare against fever
and weakened lungs. And no cicadas
to percuss afternoons, remind me my squares
might expire before their offspring fly again.
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dance around exclamation points . . . such a visual line.
Glad you will be with us this June. Your work is a treat to follow.
Thanks! I look forward to your fascinating stories every day. And it’s a real pleasure to participate.
dance around exclamation points . . . such a visual line.
Glad to be able to read your work, always a welcome treat.
“hard-won blankness.” Leave it to you for all-encompassing empathy! Glad to read my first poem of this challenge!
Thanks, Roberta. I have so enjoyed the words and thoughts today.
Enjoyed the humor among the “dirge.” Absolutely love how you use the word “percuss.” Looking forward to the other days of the month!
Thanks, Sylvia. It looks like the month is off to a good start! Looking forward to reading your words.
This is so clever and satisfying. I love the days of “hard worn blankness” and what a wonderful way to put it.
Love how you brought Time (calendar days) to life.
Really like this, esp. “On June 1st all thirty calendar squares
mark time, some in dirge mode
shoulders sagging under times
and places, others dance
around exclamation points”
Never would have thought to describe calendar squares this way–so original!
love how well your words carry physically and emotionally, especially: shoulders sagging under times
and places
I like the idea of expressing life as a series of sequential geometric shapes–especially a square, which takes up space, but maintains sharp edges to protect itself.