Cascade Cave
stalagtites drip water
in caves darker than any other place
in the universe
dancing in the Grand Ballroom
you pulled your partner close
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stalagtites drip water
in caves darker than any other place
in the universe
dancing in the Grand Ballroom
you pulled your partner close
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That darkness is so amazing, isn’t it? Thanks for helping me remember.
Love it. Not sure I want to be in one of those dark caves except in the lovely & vicarious way you provide.
the second image in the ballroom makes it a poem, and an effective one.
I really enjoyed how layered and compressed this piece is
Even in the darkest of places there is still the possibility of joy and beauty
I felt that closer pull here. In complete darkness it’s hard to dance.
I enjoy how your imagery sways from the cave to the ballroom. The line, “caves darker than any place in the universe” also struck me as very surreal. Great work!
It might be dark in that cave – but the memory sure took you somewhere!
Wow, the way you transform a cave tour into a moment of romantic power
Wow, Gaby. Nice images. And I was in this cave for the first time earlier this month!