Case of the Mondays
Not getting enough sleep
has a weird way of becoming
too much sleep
when your deepest sleep is now synced
with your alarm clock.
Got stuck-thunk-with the forklift-thunk-
with the bad-thunk-wheel. It’s-thunk-
gonna be a long-thunk-thunk-day, isn’t it?
Thunk.
The onboard logistics system
might be the most user-unfriendliest
I’ve ever encountered.
I can’t get anything done.
Also, nodding off
while the forks are going up
is not ideal.
I’ve spilled a pallet from the top rack
twice now.
It’s not even first break yet.
The boxes of trash bags
hit the poured concrete floor
exploding
like popcorn kernels.
The coffee beans erupt
in a hazelnut geyser.
And I think
I’m going
to take
an early break today.
Head for the break room. Grab a snack.
Six-pack of doughnuts, and a Red Bull.
Take seat at a table, tear into the snack
and glance at the news.
Seven shootings over the weekend.
At least eleven dead;
never to see Mondays again.
Numbers sure to grow.
Two of them graduation parties
and more horrific questions.
What is the future of this once-great nation?
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I love how the poem sweeps from “I’ve spilled a pallet from the top rack/ twice now./ It’s not even first break yet.” to “the future of this once-great nation.”
A sharp transition for sure. Thank you so much for reading!
I love work poems, and really admire the voice of yours. I trust and like it and feel sympathy towards him. Those exploding trash bags — great image!
I don’t often find them to be the easiest to write, but I donlike writing them. Hope to get a couple more out by the end of the month. Thank you for reading!
I love the way you shaped your poem on the page. It creates movement and interruption.
Love the ‘thunk’ stanza, Sets the tone throughout.
And the ending, a turn I was not expecting and brilliant:
Seven shootings over the weekend.
At least eleven dead;
never to see Mondays again.
That ‘thunk’ stanza actually looks better on mobile than I envisioned and wrote. Real happy with how this came out. Thank you so much for reading!