Central Baptist Surgery Waiting Room, 5 June 2024
Tracing veins in the waiting room floor.
a prayer seeps from me and sublimates.
Being in the OR is so much simpler
than sitting here, tending catastrophes
I bet you’ve never had so much money at once in your life!
A woman’s face aglow from her phone.
Tinny laughter from its tiny speakers.
I withdraw my earbuds conspicuously
trying to model good behavior.
You can’t wear white lace to a wedding. Are you on crack!
I keep my music low, so I’ll hear:
“Williams family, come to consulting”
I dawdle with Wordle and other games,
my nervy supplication steadily dripping.
I know it! I swear she could get lost in a round room.
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Love how you’ve captured this loud, irreverent intrusion on what should be a somber environment.
Thank you!
Yes! My thoughts exactly.
Opposing experiences and circumstances happening in one room. And how irreverent and disrespectful it feels when those in the same room appear so unaware.
Vivid detail. Both funny and exasperating.
It really was exasperating. Thanks!
i love the sublimating prayer and italicized interjections
I’m glad you like that. Thanks!
I enjoy how you crafted this poem. These interjected others balance your careful lines
Was hoping to make it as jarring as it was. Thanks!
It’s always weird and sort of infuriating when life is just going on around us in our worst moments, like a beautiful sunny day when someone dies, etc. This poem does a great job showing that feeling.
Thank you!
I’m in the scene with you all and love the character in close proximity. You write those moments with a magnifying glass to what’s interesting!
Thank you, Lisa!
Very revealing of your inner thoughts during a trying wait ! Well done.
I’m in the scene with you all and love the character in close proximity. You write those moments with a magnifying glass to what’s compelling.
Yes!
I like you contrast the potential ominous nature to the hospital. It adds
life and levity to the poem.
I’m glad that came across. Thanks for your comments!