Chicken Scratch, Doodles
I tear the page for burning—
let thick smoke stew from ashtray.
I am trying to tell you everything
I can this way: media of places
subsumed—Old Burnside
before the TVA—ditches, creeks
of my childhood—doodles of eyes
tubular and cartoonish—silk & slack—
& Jennieanydots—ideas about sound
as a manifestation of energy, as an
object you can hold—practicing bad
cursive—Kermit and Piggy’s poodle,
Foo-Foo—how swamps are like lungs
Foo-Foo—how swamps are like lungs
for the world—sick—light gray plastic
from the 80s. My letters are bubblicious
like a child’s.
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Well, Shaun, I will take your chicken scratch any day of the week and enjoy the surprise, the delight, the heartache. Time travel between child and man makes for sing-song serious. That lilt of regret.
“how swamps are like lungs
for the world” – oh, goodness!!!
I love your doodles:⁰
so much word play
meaning play
line play
each one to be taken
at least three ways.
In its simple shape
there are multitudes.
Same here, Shaun….
Yep….”how swamps are like lungs
for the world”
Oooo and aaahhh!!!
Love ‘the swamps are lungs’
And ‘my letters are bubbalicious!’
That really does take me back to drawing that style of letter. Love this, reminds me of a doodle page!
This was like reliving touchstones from my childhood. Especially bubblicious! How you worked that word into a poem is magic.
Thanks y’all! I was trying to write my poem for the day and used up so many notebook pages, I just ended up writing a list poem about drafting
I can see the little boy doodling during writing lesson, mind wandering. I can relate. Love the Andrew Lloyd Webber reference.
I love how this poem moves like watching an animator draw and seeing the character come to life. “Practicing bad cursive” lands perfectly. The depth you create with each phrase is amazing.
Another fantastic poem, Shaun!
Shaun, thank you for painting pictures of your world especially for one who is on the other side of these United States!! clean air so very important where we are breathing in the wake of San Francisco International Airport! i appreciate hearing about your world sincerley.
What an intriguing poem. So layered in meaning and image, so tender-hearted. Do we really have to wait until next June to read your poems again?
Love this stream-of-consciousness! Such an urgent mood so layered in “Chicken Scratch, Doodles”. You captured these memories and the jumble so craftily!
All this playing around with words was delightful.