COLOR
There’s a red light on the washing machine
To show that the lid is shut tight
That very same reds’ on the light of the train
That circled the tree Christmas night.
The engine shot smoke puffs up in the air
From pellets one put in its stack
Its whistle was mournful – as all are today
As the train raced around the track.
These are the things that swirl in my head
As my clothes spin round the machine
I wonder if the thoughts would be different
If instead, the light had been green.
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Never looking at laundry or machines with red and green lights on them again without thinking of this perfected rhythm and rhyme scheme!
And well, I simply shook my head at how solid this writing is!
As much fun as Edward Lear and Lewis Carroll.
Bless your heart!
That’s a fine thing to say – Thank you so much!
imagery that takes you somewhere and makes you think. well done.
Thank you.