Constructive Criticism
You run
for your life,
avoiding
shots fired.
I sit
with a loaded gun,
waiting for you
to stop running.
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You run
for your life,
avoiding
shots fired.
I sit
with a loaded gun,
waiting for you
to stop running.
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perfect title
I echo Gaby.
And it looks good on the page.
great images
Bang! So to speak 😏