Crawfish City
Ten pounds of crawfish,
Plus corn on the cob and whole potatoes,
Serves two.
Eyebrows rise
As the great speckled pot
Is set before us,
Eating them takes some effort.
Rip the tail off
Crack open the shell,
Pull the meat out.
Savor the spicey delicacy.
Then for real spice,
Suck the juice
Out of the head.
An hour later, the pot is empty,
Hands are tired, mouth burns.
Even beer won’t cool the heat.
The memory is vivid the next day,
When hands are too sore
To hold a glass of water.
I’ve heard of tennis elbow,
But who knew
About crawfish hands?
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This is delicious, Wayne. I love the “great speckled pot.” And the center is the poem, sucking the juice out of the head! Very good writing!
Thank you!
A feast.
The ingredient or content.
Lol see what I did there 🙂
Leaves us immaculately satisfied
and the stanzas and the line breaks are delicious.
And and the ending sticks with us.
Lol…..great write !
You always come up with wonderfully creative responses. Thank you!
i too, noticed ‘suck’ in the geographical center of this piece..
woke up this morning with that word, ‘suck’ on my mind-
but didn’t feel brave enough to ‘go there.’ 🙂
maybe your poem will help me break the seal.
echo: great linebreaks!
As long as you are talking crawfish, suck is always a safe word. 😀
Dang, Wayne! Take me with you next time. I bet I could make that pile of crawfish go away a whole lot faster.
I could eat them a lot faster than I could shuck them!
I like the way you
carry the aftermath
over into the next day
& your invention
of crayfish hands
Thanks!