Daybreak and the Golden Ratio:
Daybreak and the Golden Ratio:
A congregation
of Cumulus clouds hangs in
azure ecstasy
A zephyred light flinders through
trees clothed in gold and green hues
©️Winter Dawn Burns
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A congregation/ of cumulus
Wow!
Loved the word flinders, too
Happy LexPoMo
Thanks so much! I appreciate you reading my poem!
I LOVE how you’ve taken the noun “flinders” and used it as a verb! Even the sound of that word enhances that line. And zephyr traditionally refers to a wind, but you’ve effectively used it in a visual sense. Very clever and creative. Great poem!
I really appreciate you reading my poem and thank you for your comment, too!
Nice tanka!
Thanks, Kevin! I appreciate you reading it!
flinders! thanks for the new word
You’re welcome 😉 Thank you for reading my poem!
Lovely title and poem!
Awww, thanks so much for taking the time to read it!