Dear Abandoned Haiku
Left at the altar
You question love ache answers
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Left at the altar
You question love ache answers
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This tiny poem is amazing! The depth of heartache it creates is massive. Well done! 💜
I feel the ache
Such deep feeling. Well crafted.
Yes, Sylvia, to all of the comments!
Wonderful
This is so creative, Sylvia. You are writing some masterful poems this year!
Very clever!
Brilliant title and haiku!
I like the way you altered the form, and it works.
Yes. I have hundreds of abandoned haiku- not good enough.
Creative use of the form to capture deep emotion
amazing how you have been able to compress a complete dramatic monologue in this short poem
Short and bursting with emotion.
Delightful! Perfectly captures the sharp ache of being left behind. 💙
love this concise gem!
You get it.
got it