Deliver Different Weather.
A flash flood warning —
with a telegraph tornado
on the side
will remind me of you. (Stop)
Weeks later you’ll tell me
you twirled my hair in your fingers
after I was “out cold” one night. (Don’t Stop)
That storm-with-warnings ended
after
your arrival, your twelve hour journey
— Stopped —
someplace inside our first night
and though rain’s an event on the regular here in Kentucky
(God willing and the creek don’t rise)
it never returned from sender til
sometime inside
the final night
of your first visit.
Stop back again and again?
Each time, we can deliver different weather.
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Nicely themed, love “deliver different weather” for the turn.
Like the telegraph language, beginning to end, and the movement one stance to the next (like the “telegraph tornado” moves to the twirling of hair)
I really enjoyed this, especially how the “stops” provided a little space to consider what came before it.
Thank you! Pretty sure I have ancestors once involved in the Pony Express, so this was very fun. 🥰☘📚
Thank you, @Joseph! I had the skeleton of this three other day, and my beau informed me of those new details last night!
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I like that you saw and shared that!
Favorite line: (God willing and the creek don’t rise)
Mmm-mmm! Delicious language. Yes. I hear your signal loud & clear in this. <3