Disappearing Trick
I hover a little outside my body
All day and night.
Not like a gimicky cartoon ghost
waiting to get back in
But Alive, actually.
My body is alive, too
pretty much unsupervised
It starts with a memory
of our old house,
leaves on the trees
turning before a storm
A child’s legs,
my legs or yours?
It ends with me-part of me-,
up there in some weird orbit,
giving up and coming down.
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I like the line break at too/pretty good stuff! thx
was watching doctor strange last night… was this about your astral projection? are you a sorceror supreme?!?!
Ha~ not there yet but working on it
astral projection is a gift as is being a good writer. you possess both. i have always been fascinated by esotericism. well done.
Thank you, Tina !
This should read , “a child’s legs running”, y’all.
I like:
But Alive, actually.
My body is alive, too
pretty much unsupervised
It starts with a memory…
Memory plays such a part in creative writing….
Agree