Domestication Blues
When the sun goes down on the neighborhood
and all the trash cans have been wheeled back from the curb,
the dog dozes in her crate, wife in bed with her book,
I’ll stand in front of the fridge, door open,
looking for something that appeals,
perhaps a yogurt, or handful of granola,
oh, leftover turkey tetrazzini, heated
in the microwave, the crusty parts coming
out harder still, and consider a parallel life
where I am snorting illicit substances
off the stomachs of wanton women,
driving with the top down to some rager of a house party,
the cops called because of the noise,
me getting too aggressive in telling them to buzz off,
spending a long night and day in the pokey,
Lulu bailing me out and giving me the business
for being so hard-headed stupid
and when am I gonna grow up and get a real job
and a mortgage and health insurance
and, you know, live a normal life like a normal person
and then she stops talking to see if any of what
she said is sinking in, but my head is throbbing
and my foot is twitching that twitch
of wanting to up and run, I tell her to
pull into Tiny’s for a whiskey and she shakes her head,
makes a sigh of disgust, but I know she loves me,
my angel, my Lulu, always coming to my rescue,
and then I think maybe, considering my cholesterol and all,
I best stick to a bowl of good old Cheerios.
7 thoughts on "Domestication Blues"
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It is amazing what the sight of turkey tetrazzini can make one ruminate about. Love the hairpin curve in this poem, Buddy. Caught me by surprise, which so many of your poems do.
Ha! Your endings are always so great. Lulu’s character is delightfully vivid in this poem. Nice job!
Terrific, Bill! A dark reverie of temptation couched as comedy. You know just what you’re doing.
love how your flight of fancy occurs at a specific moment that contextualizes the poem
The way this poem pushes and pulls is incredible. That ending is perfect. Great write!
Ha, ha Bill.
I think we all love sin,
even the imaginary kind.
What an imaginative poem. Who would think that a “leftover turkey tetrazzini, heated
in the microwave, the crusty parts coming
out harder still,” would lead to considering a parallel life?
Your poem was a whole lot of fun, and now I’m salivating for turkey tetrazzini!