Dragging
This is the last carton of milk I must buy,
These are the final seven days-in-giant-lettered-boxes
I must fill to read like Braille at 5:00 AM,
my eyes too puffy to discern
which advent pills are next.
These are the culminating compliments
we can gift each other,
a thin layer of honey spread across all the pleas
ignored and barbs spent like careless pennies
we both hope we can forget.
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I love how you structure this. Enjoyed the line “a thin layer of honey spread across all the pleas…”
Love “advent pills” — such a great image. Nice one Austen!
Oh gosh, pennies! Apropos!
love the details used to get at the mixed feelings within the repetitive categorical sounding “This is…” “These are…” structure
“Advent pills” = compelling.
I love this! esp advent pills and barbs like careless pennies
Yes, barbs like careless pennies got me. Thanks.