Eidetic Evening Haze
Frogs call out
after storms
recede
leaving the air too
thick and fog wrapping
around edges
of the hills and filling
the valley, a heavy
blanket curling
across the air just
as dark encases
us blacking out the
moon and stars
leaving us here with
echoing frog calls and
my memory of your face
rising from fog seared so
strongly into my mind
I’ll never live a thick night
like this without you
beside me.
13 thoughts on "Eidetic Evening Haze"
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I love this – so evocative, and so loving. I can feel the fog of your “thick night.”
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you! I was very inspired by the weather and all of the happy frogs last night.
I love the music of that last stanza so much!
Thank you! I am so glad to hear that.
Love this. Outstanding imagery. Perfect close.
Thank you!
I enjoy the music of this poem, the moves from frog to fog, and the like. Great work!
Thank you! Nature handed me lots of fun words to play with last night.
/applause
Thank you!
Great rhythms. That last stanza!
Thank you! It’s so wonderful to hear that! I played with this one for a while.
Excellent. Tercets work well here.