El muertes de Los Amantes (Death of the lovers)
It came on a day when the sun was hot and bright
And filled the sky with salt and sorrow,
It came on a day when the tomatoes
were red and sumptuous, ready for plucking.
It came on a day when green leaves turned brown
And the vine hardened, snapping under their weight.
It came on a day when skin once firm and inviting
Became loose like the skin on an old woman’s arm.
It came on a day when that sweet citrus scent
Became musty like curtains and dust floating by the window.
It came on a day when spring rains stopped falling
And the earth swallowed it all into her belly.
We were lovers eating and drinking until the cup was dry,
Those aquifers waited for wells we never dug.
We turned to dust, blown away in the wind.
We are not even buried here.
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Very powerful; the repeated phrase takes us through the story…
Thank you. I was compelled yet concerned about the repeating line.
The imagery is great. The ending line is so very good!
“Those aquifers waited for wells we never dug”
Beautiful!
I love the arch of this poem! And yes, the repetition works.