Etymology
The word swaddle is like a womb
Lymphoedema. Many syllables
in this diagnosis. I must wrap my leg
so that it will stop growing. And wrap
is not kind, is not swaddle.
Swaddle,
and swole. I eschew multi-syllablism.
Lymphoedema–you could say wordy.
All words are
worlds, are mirrors. I can see myself
growing.
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The strongest ending I have read…
What a compliment. Thank you, truly.
All words are worlds….I love that
It sounded true at the time! Thank you!
I also love that ending. Thanks for this.
Thank you for reading, Bill!
Good poets love words–their roots, their sounds, their swaddle into the line. Enjoying your growth!
Thank you, Sylvia! I may be overextended the metaphor but I’m enjoying our garden of poems this month
I love the juxtaposition between “comfort in restraint” and your growth in this poem. Brilliant!
Thank you, Katrina!
So much to love in this poem. Happy to see you here again!
Thanks, Karen. I’ve been looking forward to a month of poems. 🙂
This took me back to the title of your poem from yesterday…
I admit, the title came before the poem this time.
Excellent poem, Shaun. It’s arresting and truthful not to mention well-crafted.
I really appreciate that. I totally reorganized it a couple times before my 15 minutes ran out
I love those first two lines, the sounds and words and where they come from, all the way to the end.
Thanks so much, Melva Sue!
I eschew multi-syllablism…
That’s great…makes me chuckle
Thanks, Jim. I always wanted to know why there wasn’t a shorter word for antimultisyllabalism
Love the comparison of comforting words to a womb
Thanks, Nicole!
The “halfwise mouth” really spoke to me.
Thank you, Libby! It was a happy accident.
Love this. I have systemic Primary Lymphedema so this spoke to me. Well crafted.
Thank you. It means a lot that it resonates with you as well.
A really strong, powerful poem
I love the attention to language here.