Evan’s Walk
in the morning, he would walk East,
to feel the sun on his face and arms–
edging slightly closer to the star
from which all natural light came
the trees, too, greeted the day, capturing
each hint of a breeze with their leaves,
as if a thousand small green hands
yearned to dance for the pleasure for the sun
Evan hummed when he walked, but
not loud enough to disturb the birds
who often shared their morning songs
with him–songs that bowed before the
majesty of this brightening bowl
his soft footfalls kept steady rhythm
as his heart pu-pummed its
syncopated dance and his lungs
filled like an organ bellows
Evan liked to read from the Bible
on his walks, especially the Psalms–
the sound of each page turn
a reminder that life kept moving
forward, that each step was further from home
his story would reach its final page one day
–perhaps this day, perhaps another–
but under a distant, unconstructed sky–
pale and empty of eye and ear
and touch and form
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This is lovely, Laura. You took me along on the walk this morning. Thanks!
Thank you, Nancy.
After the beautiful descriptive stanzas, those last three lines are exquisitely haunting.
Thank you, Gaby.
I agree with Gaby. The last stanza foreshadows loss
Thank you, Jim.
I really enjoyed this poem, its narrative, and the sounds here. Love “…songs that bowed before the/
majesty of this brightening bowl…”
Thank you, Shaun.
What a wonderful and caring tribute. Your active details carry us along for the walk. Love the pu-pummed sound!
Thank you, Sylvia.
Lovely walk, lovely stanzas with the foreshadowing of loss to come at the end.
Love:
his soft footfalls kept steady rhythm
as his heart pu-pummed its
syncopated dance and his lungs
filled like an organ bellows
Thank you, Pam.