Everyday Hero
* This a tanka prose form.
A prose section is followed by a five-line tanka.
Traditionally the tanka is in a 5-7-5-7-7 sequence
and the two parts need to refer to each other.
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I would so much hang out with George!!!
And love the haibun form!!!
It’s not a haibun. It has different rules. 🙃
Truth 😀 thank you ❤️
Wait … there are rules?
So he entertains, as well. I imagine you singing along.
Yay for George! He took care of you!
Nice poem.
I hope George either sees this poem, or feels it somehow. Thank goodness for people like him.
Very nice ode to all that George is to you!
I, too, hope George sees this poem. Glad you had him taking care of you “reputation for sensing when something’s wrong.”
Thanks for chowing the tanka form. WIll give it a try!
oh dear…showing not chowing
Lovely tribute to your rock/star! Thank goodness for people like George.
Your prose passage conveys your genuine affection for George and also the lasting impacts his diligence as a professional have left in your life. The casual tone in this prose part is full of respect and affection. The poem part stacks him into a whole person – work and home with the guitar plucking on breaks unifying the two. Great choices of detail. So well done.
You truly capture the poetry of everyday life.
Cheers for the meditative form and for the skill and friendship of George!
This is a beautiful tribute to George. You paint his patience and energy so well!
Thank you for being the person who notices and gives documents the dedication of healthcare workers (especially nurses).