Facing death with a half empty glass
Humans might be gods—
at least for a moment,
in their minds, because they know
all and aspire to little more
than what their broken clay shells
Ever revealed. When
Those footprints in the sands
of time washed away,
The sphynx despairs of finding
his nose ever again,
The candle met in the middle
with a whimper and was not dynamite,
The captain went down with the ship,
knackered by a mutiny of knees,
numbness of spirit, this
Worm eaten vessel trending toward
A lack of sublime days.
Oh well. Tomorrow’s another day
Same verse, different tune
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Love: “The candle met in the middle/with a whimper”
Thank you!
This one’s a little different for you, I think- a little dark. I love this poem’s wonderful word play and great imagery- and it is so full of voice!
It was a late night musing. The moon kept waking me up.
I love the turn of “The candle met in the middle/with a whimper and was not dynamite”
Thank you!
“Broken clay shelss ….” beautiful! And the tyrannies of unforgiving time never better expressed than the sphynx coming to terms with the irrevocable loss of its nose. Well done. We missed you on Monday.
It’s been a great vacation but I’m ready to see you all next Monday!