Falling In 3 Parts
1.
Memaw feels like rain’s coming.
She says it’s in her bones–the rain,
her arthritis knows it, and I know it
like I know my nephew
and how he will cough all spring,
lungdusted with pollen in his hair.
My body tells me to slow down,
to only sleep in bursts,
to smoke and hold water–
after surgery, my damaged leg is prow
and broken rudder
(one doctor called it a mud puddle).
3.
Later, my mom, laid up in her own hospital bed,
couldn’t remember much. But she looked at me,
out of breath from carrying in food, and says
“Honey, I worry about you.”
7 thoughts on "Falling In 3 Parts"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
this one hit me very close to home. thank you for writing this and thank for sharing it.
Thank you so much for your kind words. <3
Sickness like tragedy can come in threes…
Definitely a truth in my experience. Hope less bad threes for everyone.
I love the rich images in the first stanza, playful imagery and rhyme of the second, direct quotation in the third, and the perspective of the title.
Thank you for your insight, Dr. Bedetti. Your comments teach me more about writing and I appreciate them.
I really enjoyed reading this. I went back and read it again, just to make sure I was getting what was intended. It’s definitely one I can relate to.