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Lexington Poetry Month

far far away


sneaker wave swept up

detox the long road to find you

sick and tired i was



set free on the coast

spirit molecules arrive in wind

lost and broken i was



Perseus the prolific rain down

showered with revelations

hugged tight with truth i was



spread free my ashes

when the north wind blows

down the links to a back pin i am


6 responses to “far far away”

  1. Love the stanza set-up, and the way the last word of each works together.

  2. excellent first post! good use of line breaks, and the loose form serves as a nice parallel to the wide open nature of healing and discovery’s path. spread free my ashes is a lovely line.

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