Farewell on Florence Avenue
The sin of invasive roots is irredeemable. Limb by limb,
my Silver Maple comes down. Chainsaws slice
the quiet morning like a death knell,
their surgical precision carving
my front yard bare. Years of abundant shade
and seasonal fanfare is being erased
in a flash of metal and indifferent ruin.
And I feel like a traitor, skulking
inside my house where the high-pitched whine
of destruction is muted, less accusatory;
where I mourn, as emptied
as the treeless space.
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Wonderful description, well written, of a sometimes necessary destruction. I had to take two down recently.
Thanks for your kind words. It was a beautiful tree.
The “i” sounds in the first line stick out good. I feel for you, the trees.
I’m glad you pointed that out! I was so focused on line breaks, using the right verbs, etc, that I didn’t notice the repetition of sounds in the first line! Thanks!!
i like your title, first line, and how you proceed into the regret of “necessary” destruction
Thank you, Jim. It was necessary, but it sure didn’t feel right!
Great description. The first sentence sets the context brilliantly.
Bobby, as I was doing my revisions, I heard your voice saying “I’d start this poem with that line.” Not kidding! Thanks!