Father’s Day
He had not lived with her for sixty years
but her street address emerged from his tangled
atlas of neurons. He shouted it with
confidence during the cognitive tests,
the only thing he’d said in days that made
much sense, even though her street was long
buried beneath the freeway, and her house
was as wrecked as his broken-down brain cells.
Surely her windows alight at Christmas
had sparked this synapse, the sheen on her stairs
inside the door, the little table-top
tree draped with ribbons, berries, and popcorn,
the curtains drawn back, a fire ablaze
in the grate, the damper wide open.
6 thoughts on "Father’s Day"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Wow. The power of well-chosen details. Thanks for sharing this one.
Whew. “the only thing he’d said in days that made/much sense, even though her street was long/buried beneath the freeway, and her house/was as wrecked as his broken-down /brain cells.”
Such a compelling story. Amazing details and space.
I love the turn in this poem and the descriptions of her house you have chosen to highlight here. Wow!
Such important details to the story and sad about his broken down brain cells!
So rich. Unbearably poignant. The second stanza tears me to pieces.