First Night of Summer
patio strung with lights
wood fire pizzas and beer
last train rattles by
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patio strung with lights
wood fire pizzas and beer
last train rattles by
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This sounds like such a wonderful night, just gathering around with family and friends. Perfection.
Wonderful moment captured! Thanks, Gaby.
You had me as wood fire pizzas! Warm family feelings mixed with the lonesome train.
the last line completed it
I feel this. Fantastic. Thanks.
The stillness in the first two lines creates contrast with the movement of the last line
The first night and last train are enticing.