Fleeting Harmony in the Pancake Cafe
Invisible waves of the moon cause the tender
chamber of a bay oyster to undulate like a gauzy
ruffle. When I sing low to my hollyhocks
their wooly stems & satiny petals
stretch faster & further. My voice
drifts into an orange burst of petals
& the pale yellow stamen shakes off
specks of pollen. Today at the pancake cafe
I confessed to Paula in-between coffee warm-ups
& syrupy platters as she worked the breakfast
rush, stopping briefly to catch
up with me as I polish off a short stack, one
egg over easy. Tears pulsated behind
my eyes like bantam hearts. Sorrow
finding a listener. I felt a variation in her body
as if the diction of my pain could swim
like a black-necked swan into her stride & gently
slacken her pace. In a shivering spectrum
I can’t hear or see & like buried roots
intertwined, we briefly harmonize.
Guitar string. Piano key.
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Finely constructed and finely worded, from beginning to end. And it brings the reader in!
Thanks Jim. You are quick this morning. I’m still sitting here correcting mistakes. I appreciate your sensitive feedback so much!
This is perhaps my favorite line:
“I felt a variation in her body/as if the diction of my pain could swim/like a black-necked swan into her stride…”
The sounds in this poem are so complex and I really enjoyed it.
^ What Shaun said.
Beautifully crafted. Weaving language and art into the “mundane” to catch the energy of that moment for your reader.
Wonderful language and imagery is captivating. “Tears pulsated behind/my eyes like bantam hearts.” Your poetry is enriching and inspiring!