Flight Pattern
The safe people in casual
silk laughing in that almost-rich
suburban way. My sister
& I think they all own
sailboats & Cessnas. Have turquoise
swimming pools, eat
escargot with silver tooth
picks. We lack the suavity
to get by here, but we want to stick
around & pretend. Peek
into the windows of their tony
boutiques. Linger late
on the boulevard, eat chicken
schnitzel & sauerkraut
at Stella’s. We spot
a vintage navy
Mercedes cruising
on cobblestone, squat
on a cast-iron bus
bench & wait for the street
lights to switch on. Their beams
shoot though amber globes,
circa-1926, form golden swirls
that dance in the air like pinwheel
ghosts. The 10:30 Steeltown
Express rolls up to the red
shingled bus stop & we shuffle
back to the elongated
leather bench seat, back
to our bedimmed home
town where, like hidden
jailbirds, we are, for
today, united. Soon
we will each run
in opposite directions.
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what a great narrative poem.
amidst all the glitz then the shuffle
back and soon the irrevocable
separation of sisters
All of the s words are my favorites.
Like the air leaking out of childhood.
Do you want to go to a suburb and eat some schnitzel & sauerkraut at Stella’s and take the Steeltown Express home?
Lol….sounds scrumptious .
simply salivating at the salty barrage of sibilance
I love especially how the title brings the two worlds together
The poem has the sound of aeronautics and take-off. There is something hiding in the last stanza that leaves me feeling uneasy. When I go back to the top of the poem to understand, I immediately see “safe people.” Trapped in our own perceptions? Trapped in our station of life? For what crime (hidden jailbirds)?
I heard it too Amy. I chalked it up to the air coming from the s’s….maybe I’m not crazy. Lol…..maybe.
today, united. Soon
we will each run
in opposite directions.
I heard the noise of vehicles in and out, even the two sisters running at the end. Love love your line breaks!
Intriguing. Love the ending and how it echoes back to the title.
I love how the bus brings you back to the present “moment” at exactly 10:30!
“form golden swirls / that dance in the air like pinwheel / ghosts. ” — what a terrific image. This so reminds me of friends I’ve had, former co-conspirators, who’ve I’ve parted ways with. Thanks for this one.
Linger late /on the boulevard — all those Ls….
Readers viewing the voyeurs! So wonderful I want to see where this could go, like a book beginning.
Love those vivid details