(following some quaint quote on the calendar all the way down to the mouth of the ant mound):
It wasn’t enough to just
simply splutter, the moon’s
a fuming mother of roquefort;
albeit begging it, braying so
wild and high, to
paw back bloated and broken
and bone-stoked tides tucked
under the pale little piddies of
what was a pitiless zeitgeist
pestled in paperclips, mate-
less shoes, and china hutch
death camps—albeit, give
the moon a chance, perchance, re-
clined in the scatterling eyes of but
cats and rats and bats and hunch-
backed children, winking as
slow as some juggernaut
godling’s heart bleats
blithering, blistering, raw. Though,
Carlyle gropes his napoleon
into a pearl, and, proudly, one
with his fist now, chucks it,
skipping off crossly across all the piquing
spume, his soles now stitched with the pine-
tar tollund man’s tedious muscles preserved
in tire tread, staggering
ahab’s stammering
shadow pinched paler than pigeon shit, peakéd
meringue refraining from mentioning eggs
or its free-
range chicken
progenitors even—begging
the graven cliche to crack and,
tackhammer-prattling, tell us now,
which came first, the
soul or the spirit—
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Ooh, I live “a fuming mother of roquefort” and the percussion of “pinched paler than pigeon shit”
Thank you.
Great title! I love “the moon’s/a fuming mother of roquefort”, “paw back” (so much muscle in this phrase) and, ” pinched paler than pigeon shit,”
Thank you.
I like the relative economy of this, Goldie. And that last line is a killer.
Thank you. Trying to do a fresh take on the chicken-and-egg dilemma.
This is so amazing. Tears while reading this. Everything. The title! Reminds me of a Paul Simon song! (Give the moon a chance perchance) Reminds me of a Western by Jim Jarmush (The graven cliche to crack) starring Hunter S Thompson.
Ahab
Napoleon
Reclined in the scatterling eyes of but rats or cats
Skipping off crossly
Soles stitched with pine tar
I mean, I just want to re write the entire poem back to you, its that good!
Thank you! Those are thrilling comparisons I probably don’t deserve. We had just watched the graduate though, so the Simon probably nestled up in there somewhere.