For Ramsey: An evening walk, NYC in the 1970’s
smoothed down softly
the front of your coat,
magenta, pink, wool
fitted
snug with buttons,
little fur trim
flaring at the hem
I placed you down to walk,
half my height.
your hand
reached for mine
and mine for yours
as we left Canal Street
the sidewalks narrowed
Hand in hand
we navigated as one,
avoiding women with bundles
men too tall to see us
boys huddled pushing fast
couples in love floated by
young and old all moving
with little quick steps
pitter-pattering as we
flowed deeper into
Chinatown
Excitement engulfed us
into tangible street theatre
people like dancers
hit the sidewalks
as heart beats
In the midst of it all
You moved like Royalty
a tiny Empress
harvesting delights
Blinking lights lured us on
your eyes wide
sighting golden ducks
high in windows
ceramic jars of magical things
steam cabinets of dumplings
decorative paper sculptures
hanging mid air
fluttering calligraphic signs
artifacts in red with flecks of gold
glittering as we passed by
I cannot remember
what brought us
to Chinatown
our mission vague,
but now I think
it was
for these very sights bright
letting me recall that night
For I’ve walked
that street a thousand times
with you forever linked
hands holding tight
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This is so lovely! l lived in Brooklyn’s Chinatown (less known than Manhattan’s but it’s there in all its glory). I felt like I was right there with you. I know this excitement! Thank you.
Thank you for taking the time to read this —just getting it in under the wire of this last day…! I appreciate your comment…and it is so true that the indelible sights of Chinatown stay with you always…glad you had that experience to. Thank you for all the encouraging comments you have made this June! I have really appreciated them! and reading your poems so very much. Thank you !
lovely, I can see and hear it
Thank you for reading..and commenting that you “hear” things from it..I know I hear it..but even though I did not intend the sound—maybe it is implied enough and it arises on its own from it being in the city…so glad you said that. Thank you.
Exquisite! Love the shape of the poem, the tenderness, and the vivid capture of Chinatown!
Thank you so much for your comments. They are much appreciated!
Very, very nice! I especially like the idea that you don’t know why you were there – the purpose being less important than the moments you describe so vividly.
Yes—isn’t it true—those incidental moments adjacent to a main purpose event…sometimes are the ones that shape is. Thank you so much for your comments—they are much appreciated!
This is a beautiful piece. You brought us right there with you.
July 1, 2023 at 4:19 pm (Edit)
Thank you so much for your comments now and this month—they have been so very much appreciated!
Thank you so much for your comments now and this month—they have been so very much appreciated!