Friend of a Friend She Pulled Me In
Five-five sandaled feet,
reed slim,
oval face, high cheekbones
soft wide-set eyes,
light scar beneath the left
delicate features,
winsome smile
playing song she wrote
hunkered down, folded ‘round
well-worn 1930s
Harmony banjo found in dumpster
at age fourteen,
flavor of Carter Family in the air,
calmly glances up while
last notes linger
“Hey you, come on in”
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beautiful portrait of the friend of a friend!
Thank you, Linda. Your words mean a lot to me
Agree with Linda. Well drawn!
Love the title and the details between and the sweetness in
““Hey you, come on in””
Thank you very much, Pam. Appreciate your insights
Great snapshot! Love “flavor of Carter Family in the air” and her “Hey you” welcome.
Thank you for your kindness, Sylvia. Happy you found Carter Family and “Hey you” welcome of interest
I really enjoyed the movement and sounds of “hunkered down, folded ‘round/well-worn 1930s/Harmony banjo…”
Thank you, Shaun, for your perceptive words. Pleased to hear you enjoyed that segment (that’s encouraging, as it took a bit of work to get it to fall in place)
Very nice – with all the right details!
Thank you so much, Nancy. I’m thrilled it resonated with you
The title is so inviting. I love “Harmony banjo found in a dumpster.”
Thank you, Virginia Lee. I’m always happy when you connect with my writing