From Both Ends
The morning whiles away a lazy wind
& wicks the sweat from skein of last night’s dream.
Invisible, it spins a dervish din
that sets a bit of fallen ash to seem
to dance within a web—and echo when
the things I hoped gave way to dawn’s harsh gleam.
There is no breeze as dark descends to night;
the spider has devoured what remained.
& cast aside, or swallowed, that svelte wight
of nicotine & paper, wanton stain,
has drifted to another world, from sight,
or risen to the pulse of dreamer’s vein.
I light the tip & birth a wayward twin
to introduce the two somewhere within.
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* Kicking off LexPoMo Writer Synergy: Kudos to Manny JG for his challenge. In an hour, write of opposites, presented in two stanzas, tied together in a couplet Volta *
That’s an insane challenge!!!🤯
Mr. Grimaldi is taskmaster 😂
this is really satisfying…. I love the off kilter presentation making a Frankenstein of spiders and cigarettes. One can almost see the slowly crawling smoke “twin” seeping through spaces – maybe that spider is going into your lungs. e-gads.
Literally, it is 🤦🏼♂️ On that habit again next week.
Figuratively, legit.
Ty again, sir!
You master any form you challenge. Great sounds and interesting construction to make it work brilliantly.
Ty Jay! ☺️
You and Kristen (and Doc) are to blame 😂
This is a joy to read in all kinds of different ways.
Thank you, Shaun!
I love “risen to the pulse of dreamer’s vein.” I love the Shakespearean feel of this. I think I might have to try this Manny prompt. He’s so disruptive, that Manny!
Isn’t he??
Even told me to be watching your work 😉
Thank you 💙
And he’s a big fan of yours. 🙂
Ha! Well, you’re the one he repetitively tells ME to watch 😂
Good one! I like “whiles away a lazy wind and wicks…”
Title excellent.
Only an hour?????
Misses YOU!
Not to brag but…48 mins 😂
Thank you, dear!
Wonderful stuff Joseph- this creates the same atmosphere and gives me the same feels a good Neil Gaiman short story does
Oh man. THAT is a compliment I won’t forget!! Shanks!
The sound of this one entrances me! Great job meeting Manny’s challenge.
Thank ya, Alvera!
Wow, just beautiful. Great sounds, word choices, imagery, counterpoint. Lovely.
Ty Jasmine!
Enjoyed reading your piece last night and look forward to more.
awesome iambic meter throughout
🙌🏼💙