Ghost-rhythm
The little red truck, its relentless
work. Memaw once saw it move low—
window cracked just enough.
Enough for the slow rhythm
too soft to parade itself—
a dented chariot by the old root cellar.
I want to hold them in my hand now.
Barnlight on broken glass. The field
Barnlight on broken glass. The field
blurred thick through the heat-haze fractured
even in my dreams:
even in my dreams:
a mechanical psalm.
Just the ghost-
rhythm of when the heart cracked open—
every interstate exit
a groan of brakes and the smell of diesel.
a groan of brakes and the smell of diesel.
This is a cento made from lines of my previous LexPoMo 2025 poems.
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Let me be the first to write, beautiful.
“a dented chariot by the old root cellar.
I want to hold them in my hand now.
Barnlight on broken glass.”
I think the work you’ve created this month is the strongest. I can’t wait to watch you organize these into the most epic collection. Love you!
I second Sam’s words.
Also love the sound and rhythm in “Barnlight on broken glass.”
Great Job Shaun!
“Barnlight on broken glass. The field
blurred thick through the heat-haze fractured
even in my dreams:”
Yes!!! Shaun, it’s been a pleasure to read your work this month. Keep writing! I hope to read more of your incredible creations next June. Happy summer.
Thanks for a month of good poems!
Love meaning of the title as it relates to your form of the cento! Adds a great depth.
aw wow, love this shaun. what a great idea to make a cento of your stunning poems, and truly this is such an artfully constructed cento. loved reading your work this month. perfect way to end it!
So many good words and feelings here…