Great Mother
Before Alzheimers visited
her like a swarm
of bats, Jean Valentine
wrote Lucy, a chain
of poems about the fossilized
skeleton of a hominid, half
my size. Lucy
is part prayer, part
struggle. Faceless
presence, a repository
of grief & source
of the poet’s comfort. A black
& white shot of her looks
like broken
jewelry. No table
of contents, few titles, many
repeating images —- spiders,
stars, wildflowers. Rilke,
Chekhov, Williams
Lucy,
one long poem of bone
fragments stubbornly
punctuated. Poetry of open
doors, of possibilities, empathy,
emptiness. Breadcrumbs
scattered on a bare
kitchen counter, flower
seeds, whispered notes
of lullabies. Glimpses
of the lost
& forgotten.
How do you translate
the unconscious & invisible?
When Jean Valentine’s memories
began to unfasten
it was clear —- she was floating away
once & for all
from the book of fathers.
Jean & Lucy now singing
from the marrow, liberated
from curse. Jean & Lucy,
receivers of the dead
& unborn, wildflowers
that break rock.
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The form here is strikingly apt — the fractured lines echoing both Valentine’s mental decline and Lucy’s physical scattering. That last stanza is killer.
May be my favorite of the month. Just amazing. And that last couple lines “wildflowers/that break rock” — wow. What a joy and privilege it’s been to read Linda Bryant for 30 straight days.
Wow. Incredible poem. Shaped and researched and then wow ! This is solid.
Can I say that from the very first time I saw your writing, I have been infatuated with every part of you.
Thank you for sharing your poems.
and thank you for sharing your insight,
your art and your life with me. I love you.
Big blush, you mushy mountain man.
Get a room, you two! 😏❤️
what I especially like about the elegy is the affirmative last three stanzas
Love this. …”wildflowers/ that break rock.”
Exceptional – Thank you for these words.
this poem is really beautiful and has this cold, echoing feeling that is really reflective of its theme. i love this poem thank you for writing it 💗
Wow. This is amazing. Alzheimers visiting her like a swarm of bats, that is a great image for that. I love so many things about this poem. Where can I even start? It is beautiful!
This is achingly beautiful. Each image is so deep and raw, and the reader can see Jean’s descent into Alzheimer’s as the poem progresses. I especially love “breadcrumbs scattered on a bare kitchen counter” and “wildflowers that break rock.”
Linda; you & Coleman are true wordsmiths. This one is so beautiful
I’m ready to do a deep dive into Lucy.
What a fitting tribute to JV.
I would love to get togethe with you guys and do a poetry reading.
Let’s do it, Jim. You need to come see Owsley Fork Writers Sanctuary too.
This one took my breath away over and over–beautiful and haunting. I love Jean Valentine’s poetry. Will have to find LUCY.
So many brilliant similes and metaphors! And, a wonderful reminder to read Jean V again!
With these words and spaces to hold them:
one long poem of bone
fragments stubbornly
punctuated. Poetry of open
doors, of possibilities, empathy,
emptiness. Breadcrumbs
scattered on a bare
kitchen counter, flower
seeds, whispered notes
of lullabies. Glimpses
of the lost
& forgotten.
I see a mind scattering. Beautiful Linda.
Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing your work and home! Inspiration!
I’ve so much enjoyed getting to read your poems this month.
“one long poem of bone
fragments stubbornly
punctuated. Poetry of open
doors, of possibilities, empathy,
emptiness. Breadcrumbs
scattered on a bare
kitchen counter, flower
seeds, whispered notes
of lullabies…”
Just jaw-dropping. Speaks to and is example of what poetry can be