Haibun With LexPoMo Notes
In his first poems, Dustin wrote in a minimalist vibe but was also profane, provocative, on the edge of offensive. Something kicked in about a week into the month-long marathon project. A slight seriousness began to seep into his verse. His words became more descriptive, more probing, occasionally bullseye deep. I know he still wants to shock some folks, make them a little uncomfortable. But Dustin is digging this writing thing more even checking for off-rhyme, texture and metaphor.
Fed up with MAGA
gender roles & politics
he writes hot, cools down.
Shaun started writing this month in an easy-to-understand way. Every year I’ve admired his clarity and intuitive insights which are often nature-based but also connected to emotion. When you least expect a writer can take a quantum leap. Hang-glide off a cliff reaching for a new literary altitude. That’s exactly what Shaun did. “This took my breath away,” Karen said. “It felt like one of the poets we’d been taught in school,” Joseph added.
An abandoned corpse
of a moored-up Ford
takes off as a poem.
* Dear poets, I really am going to miss reading LexPoMo’s poems even though I’ve burned the candle at both ends this year. I had 12 people to write about but I only managed to write about two because it took longer than I thought it would. There’s always next year!
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xoxo,
from ‘2024 lexpomo asshole of the year’.. 🙂
thanks for your words this month,
you’ve cemented your position as
my occasional genius,
and moonlighting muse.
vote vote vote!!!!!!!!!!!
I kind of busted you, although I didn’t mean it as ‘dissing’ at all. You are a gem!
Dustin, you were faithful in commenting, even when my work prevented me from visiting yours more often. Thank you for your input and your tenacity! I appreciate the wisdom there!
Ditto to what both said to you here. Glad to have you among our number.
Linda, this is so cool of you to have done! It takes a special eye and a special poet to notice the subtle shifts over a month’s worth of writing. Wishing you a wonderful July and beyond!
and… not for nothing-
but shaun’s been subtle-y breaking my heart, off and on
for the last four years.. 🙂
Ditto. Ditto. I am blessed to have been able to meet him and tell him that in person last week, finally.
Aww, how sweet of you to pay tribute to the growth of other writers! Love it. See you next time!
How lovely of you to shout out some people!
Thanks, Linda! This just goes to show how much you care about LexPoMo and us ink-stained wretches. We care about you, darlin. Can’t wait till next year.
especially loved watching Shaun “Hang-glide off a cliff”
May we all ” Hang-glide off a cliff”.
Learned lots from all.
(I take a very tiny humble credit
for introducing dustin to lexpomo
when he was doing a broom-making
workshop at my wife’s farm.)
Your poems have been a constant
source of amazement and inspiration.
It’s been a privilege to read you,
this year and every year.
We have to meet with person. My “stroke-i-ness” has gotten better.
I mean *in person.”
This was so well done ! I enjoyed reading your work and insightful comments this month! Thanks for sharing!
Great stuff from a giving poet. Thank you for all your support, Linda.
Thank you, Linda, for your efforts here and along the reply lines of LexPoMo! Your insights are taken to heart! Best of luck with your publication!
As said by the rest, you are our poet mama here 💙🫂. Both of these “caricatures” so spot on, I feel, and I have no doubt the effect it will have to bolster them in their craft.
That hang-gliding metaphor is pure gold.
Thank you so much for your body of work this month and for the pleasure and shock of being seen by your poet’s eye: a real gift. I’ve loved getting to read your poems and appreciate so much the care with which you’ve read mine too.
What a fitting end to a great month! Love your insightful eye. You see the world in poetry, and it’s a joy to read your work. Continue healing!
Fantastic way to end the month! I’m in AWE of the talent here, and can’t wait to see what next June holds.