Yoda Needle to Zero Sets
What like you, dislike fully.
What you dislike, fully like.
Crest
trough.
Placid lake moonlit see.
What sweet, fully bitter make.
What bitter, make fully sweet.
Skin
slough.
Hole inside from wiggle free.
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Love the balanced stanzas and rhymes in this, Mike. “What bitter, make fully sweet” is a wonderful mantra for me today. Thanks!
makes me recall the cicada in a 17 year cycle. 🙂
all. that. waiting. with no space to turn around.
nothing but itch to scratch etc.
Ha! I’ve loved your work this month, Mike, and this is no exception.
delightful
in craft and meaning,
Yodian, one might say.
Your poems this year
are Fan-tastic!
Yes. Yodian is the perfect way to describe it! I really enjoy your humor and your poetry
Clever and crafty! Thanks for sharing Mike!
Agree with Bill re mantra:
What bitter, make fully sweet.
Beautiful balance and thoughtfulness! I’ve enjoyed reading your work this month.
Mike, it’s always a pleasure!
I meant to say, a pleasure always it is!
You are quite the wordsmith! A joy to read your work this year!
Thank you all for your kind comments and contributions to LexPoMo. Have a wonderful and poetic rest of your summer.