He Brings Me Roses
The smell of old-fashioned
rose bushes
always does me in—
thick, complicated,
a tapestry for your nose.
They overflow any vase
in their bounteous imperfection,
nothing like the hothouse buds
that look perfect
smell like nothing
but an imitation
of the real thing.
I cried last year
when we had to trim
the bushes back
fearing the loss
would be permanent,
but they returned
stronger than ever,
as my husband
assured me they would.
This is love, I tell him,
when I breathe in
this year’s cutting.
Yes, he says,
as he sucks on
his thorn-bloodied finger.
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This is beautiful, especially in the way it engages the sense of smell. So many gorgeously crafted lines:
“a tapestry for your nose”
“as he sucks on his thorn-bloodied finger”
I love the authentic love/old fashioned rose bush metaphor, especially the sacrificial aspects, like the trimming of the bushes, and the “thorn-bloodied finger.” This is beautiful!
Gorgeous & deep.
your poem makes me envious
This is lovely – the words and the thoughts.
“a tapestry for your nose” – love that. Lovely poem and fun twist at the end.
A beautiful poem. I love the old fashioned roses too.