Heavenly Bodies
Happy, I notice everyday,
with gratitude you haven’t
left like you’d promised.
Today as you stir the salt
caramel syrup into coffee, light
rays breach Mercury, strike bright
radiographic violet-blue hues
that reach us as the image of
our raging red sun.
This morning, Sze, the Poet Laureate sings—
hearkening to last night. The play
on distance in Arcturus broods me.
Arcturus remote, reaches beyond
to kiss autumnal earth, and you roll away.
I can’t touch your shoulder.
I’m trying to reach you.
You emerge with Samsonite bag, dressed
to go, two shades of eyeshadow, just so.
Far-out babe—! but wait,
you never wear makeup, or visit
a public bathroom, without a plan.
I’ve shined down on this home of azure
for two years. Now, I cannot trust
your hues when you leave.
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Haunting love poem- shined down on this home of azure for two years. Now I cannot trust your hues when you leave.. very poignant.
thank you dear
thank you so very much
Rich and lush, Manny, with layered meaning.
Especially love:
Arcturus remote, reaches beyond
to kiss autumnal earth, and you roll away.
I can’t touch your shoulder.
💛
Yeah, I think the fifth is my favorite too. And not sure why but “stir the salt”
Lit one of the bumpers for me.
Wow, Manny! This a gorgeous poem. The sixth verse shows lyricism tinged with a slight of surrealism.
I’m trying to reach you./ You emerge with Samsonite bag, dressed/ to go, two shades of eyeshadow, just so.
A triumph. I’m stunned.
The theme of the colors is interesting. I think of azure as a pleasant, happy hue, the color of a seaside resort, in contrast with the angry red of the sun. Works well here.
The phrase “broods me” stopped me, considering the potential multiple meanings.
My favorite line is, “I’m trying to reach you.” Weighty.
I also love that you know that women typically blend two shades for eye shadow, “just so.” Nice detail and good observation.