Home From the Funeral
Daddy’s dead but the wash is still wet,
so Mama and I stand side by side
at the strand of fence wire strung between the pecan trees
in the orchard late this breezy afternoon,
her mouth full of clothespins
so no word between us, no sound at all
but our breathing in, breathing out
as I hand her my cloroxed T-shirts to hang on the line,
the wind filling their sleeves as if with shoulders,
our own shoulders touching,
our own arms splayed like the limbs of these trees
that have sheltered us all our lives,
holding off the setting sun.
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The shoulders, the clothespins, the smell of bleach–so much rich imagery bringing your ready the scent and motions of grief. Beautiful!
Sorry. I meant to type, “bringing your reader.” I got way ahead of my fingers on this one. 🙂 I particularly love the last line.
Hauntingly beautiful.
Wonderful memory beautifully captured with all the senses
Painfully beautiful – normal life having to continue even after death, but the memories are still with you. Love the idea of the wind filling out the t shirt sleeves “as if with shoulders.”
Ah, so powerful. A lasting image. And hanging clothes on a fence, I know about that.
There you go again, writing another breathtaking gem. There is so much I love about this poem. I love the mouth full of clothepins and the cloroxed T-shirts. I love how you marry the shoulders of the wind-filled T-shirts with human shoulders and then take the image into the limbs of the trees. Sigh.
Simply beautiful!
After the pain, or the ecstasy in other cases, there is still house work. The sheltering trees as the final image mirroring the people who wear the clothes, there is a nurturing character running here, and from the beginning. Bravo.
Gorgeous writing. I enjoyed this poem
I have read this many times. Each time I cry.
Thanks for the beautiful comments, everybody!