Hope Has a Fragrance
In remembrance of Sallie Bingham & The Writer’s Nose Workshop
Layers of hope
mound like satin ribbon bows
twirled around the base of the lilac bush,
clutch the gaps in between boards
of an old wood fence,
brew in the delicious tangle
of honeysuckle vine and sassafras root,
keep seasonal tempo
a metronome that eclipses the sun
as the first buds swell in early spring
prepare to release the poignant sweetness
of magnolia and wisteria,
cupped in droplets of gentle rain
fragrant language rolling into the valley
embraces those that hunger for better times.
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It’s funny (good) that this poem ends with “those that hunger for better times” because as I was reading, I actually *was* getting a feeling of hunger. Which was so subtly accomplished through honeysuckle and sassafras and sweetness that I didn’t realize I was being primed for that kind of ending. Masterfully (and deliciously) done!
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Your poem takes me back to younger days growing up in the Appalachian Mountains. Very well done.
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This is so visual, Lee! I feel like I am there. Absolutely adore “a metronome that eclipses the sun.” I agree with R.J. about the hunger part and the masterful deliciousness.
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Beautiful tribute
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Rich imagery, a sensual feast. Reading this poem aloud brings its lyricism to life. Makes my day, Virginia Lee
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