HOUSE FIRE
we remember vividly
our tears wetting our doorways
that would slam shut instantly
sobs sailing down the hallway
could they tell at revival
that you only loved briefly
and pray for our survival
ash coats hands of the greedy
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I like the second stanza with revival/survival. I think there is more here than you have on the page.
I have a story hidden in this. You are right that there is more to say! I hope to find those words in the future.