How He Wants to Go
In early spring we tossed
soft her gritty
ashes. Wedding rice
at the final exit.
From the damp womb
of pine & birdsong,
the forest renamed her —
drifting mist of membrane
& pale pollen. My husband
says he, too, would like
the final dust of him salted
back to earth. Throw me back
to the green, he says. I will
return as red maple
& silverbell. When autumn
arrives, I will become glow
of witch-hazel, lighting your way.
17 thoughts on "How He Wants to Go"
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This “the forest renamed her —
drifting mist of membrane
& pale pollen.” line is hammered gold. Pollen…wow!
Very well crafted piece.
The 2nd stanza is my favorite! Damp womb of pine & birdsong. Beautiful poem!!
lovely work here!
Funny, there’s a typo I didn’t catch (seems like 9 times out of 10 there are!) It’s supposed to read “tossed her soft gritty ashes” not ” tossed soft gritty ashes.” Poetry is so weird it almost works either way.
Sure does, I really like “tossed soft gritty ashes”. I like the whole piece, it’s lovely and touching and those last lines are beauties.
Funny, but I almost liked “tossed / soft her gritty / ashes” better, because it suggested reverence and regret.
This poem is beautiful, full of sadness, and at the same time, peace.
happy accidents! I love this poem either way!
Sweet and sad. A goodbye and longing to stay.
especially love the word “salted” and “soft the gritty / ashes”
So lovely and well-executed. This poem really invited me in and slowed me down. Thank you!
Lovely. Tell Coleman I’ll help you toss his ashes. I want some witch hazel glow too.
Oh Linda, this is gorgeous, from the soft ashes to the glow at the end.
Beautiful, Linda. The enjambment works well, and the closing metaphors are touching.
I love how this poem ends in a beautiful and comforting way
he forest renamed her —
What a lovely line! The whole poem is wonderful, and the husband’s quote at end caps it!
Beautiful- loved the line drifting mist of membrane!
The language and imagery are so novel and stunning. First stanza is amazing.