hypothesis strumming the heart bone
If life’s light,
labyrinth dapple illumining
newts and roots in some
rude wood, then
you’re
those impressions of
berries and terry-cloth-
fairykin fanning the will
o’ the wisp—that’s
not to suggest some
frantic flame foul
water fowl, cramped
green herons, or envious
cavefish, straining their
scales against virginal flints, flicked,
siren-lithe light left licking that
lip of some snickering precipice—no,
the will o’ wisp thus draws us evermore
homeward, stars stirred dappling up among
bubbly rubble that, suppling, spreads
bubbly rubble that, suppling, spreads
beside your sole like
gashed and rattling
light combed into this
jodeling halo.
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Love this, Goldie! Some of your maximalist poems overwhelm me, to be honest, but this briefer, tighter piece really lands for me. Excellent work.
Thank you.
So sweet. I had to look up will o the wisp and jodeling.
A beautiful poem in your typical fashion. This one reminds me of your favorite movie by Wim Wenders, Wings of Desire. Apparently the movie was inspired by Rilke’s Duino Elegies. After some more thought I realized your poetry often resembles Rilke’s. It’s always a bit difficult to take in on the first or second or fifth read, but nonetheless can sink in eventually, like a dream comes back to you sometimes. I’ll have to explore the comparison more.
You told me this poem was for me to celebrate our anniversary. Thank you. I owe you one.
Thank you! I could’ve just said you’re my guiding light in the dark, but you know me. What’s more, so simple a sentiment just doesn’t cover it.