I climb Jack’s Knob
I climb Jack’s Knob
here on the page,
for it rises up
from my memories
of it.
It
sighs. Its trees
lean, growing up
as they age.
I sit on its top,
a fine point where
a hawk’s view
is 360 degrees.
The reader who sees
it is not the new
climber, but has been there
before–seen leaves drop–
felt snow on the face–
heard the far off sound
of a coon hound treeing,
calling “come see
this poetry,
tired of fleeing,
I found
in this place”.
13 thoughts on "I climb Jack’s Knob"
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I love the imagery of visiting a place on the page – the trees jump off at me
Jane, I am awed by the way you find life in the trees… Thanks…
What a good poem! Having been there before it calls for me to “come.see”
Jim, isn’t it meaningful when you hear a poem calling out to you? I appreciate your wisdom.
Only by climbing do you get the whole view. Your poem is filled with images collected by those lucky enough to have had a climb or two tucked away to remember down here on this flat plain.
K. I came to this poem after watching a video of WWII soldiers going up and over a towering cliff under machine gun fire. Their conquering the day, gave me many days to roam upward in safety and joy.
Love the images in this poem.
I took the climb with you. Good job.
Linda, did you enjoy the view from the peak as I always do? I want to believe you did.
Great idea for a poem…The last stanza is especially strong.
Geri, my hope is for every poem to end with such power. Thank you for finding this poem’s strength.
Linda, your German surname is very fitting for my poem. Thanks for reading and loving my poem’s images.
Geri, I was happy to have you with me on this climb.