I Keep Falling in Love with Strangers (Part 1)
She’s reading and doesn’t notice me
marvel at her mane of hay-red hair.
A small plastic clip grips one-handed,
like an underweight cowboy trying his darndest
to tame 8 seconds of prairie-wild bull.
The crowd holds its breath, but of course he can’t hold out
and creamsicle tendrils fall like fireworks across her shoulders.
For him, it’s a pat on the back, and better luck next time
For me, it’s summer night and starlight and ask her to dance.
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I like how your poem meanders from real visual to imagined and the clip becomes cowboy and also I wonder where poem is happening? It could be anywhere—-waiting room, coffee shop, library. Like this fun innovation!
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Beautifully crafted–I love the cowboy imagery, the hay-red hair, and how the last line reveals the speaker.
WOW!!! I pictured my daughter’s unrulily curls here… Overwhelming whatever clip or fastener of any kind!
The end is joyful and full of love for the authentic version of the girl with the mane 😉
Great play on words association… the “mane” that leads to a cowboy metaphor.