I Left My Cell Phone in Sunset Park
Didn’t know it until 26-hard-walked blocks, 79-no-breeze
degrees later. My 1st hair appointment in 16 months
cut short by gray, rolling gate—the solid type guarding
Delilah’s Salon, the Greek oasis I sought, shuttered.
Reached for phone. Not there. No phone to check
for a text about delay or to call to ask what’s up?
No phone to call for help if I became prey to humans
or to cancer dizzied-recovery exacting demands.
I sought shade in street lamp’s thin shadow, trembled,
exposed. Angled radiated, sun-sensitive skin to shadowed
safe space, sipped water, and pondered options.
I was her 1st appointment, in a city where traffic snarls.
Waiting seemed fair. I quit panhandling time when folks hurried
by this long-haired, southern-displaced voice calling softly, gently.
The sun bore hard heat, no earth to absorb and buffer. No phone
to check emails, texts, or to play dominoes opened me to a true,
still way to discover where I landed. Delilah’s Salon and Rice & Beans,
Latino/Hispanic local eatery, formed the 1st floor of a single 5-story-
walkup, red-bricked façade bookended by vacant lots—both fenced,
one red, the other white, invited graffiti’s light and color signatures:
black tags—no overlapping disrespect and one throw-up bubble-style
spoke bold its author’s name. Grass tufts stubbled the ground
like an old man who forget that shaving mattered.
Rigger Waterproofing advertised between 2 sets of windows—faces
with lots of stories behind broken blinds, mis-matched curtains,
window gates to keep babies from falling unlike my cousin who died
a year before I was born. One item Rigger advertised intrigued:
brick pointing. Set me to wondering what bricks point out…
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This is so fun. The musing of one’s mind while waiting – missing that one “fidget”, the phone, that seems to be our essential tie to everything. I love the last stanza starting with “lots of stories behind broken blinds, mismatched curtains” and ending with “set me to wondering what bricks point out …”
Thanks, Alyse! These bricks did some pointing!
Yes, the progression and story of the poem invites the reader along with the narrator observing the world around them. Really like how the poem.ends on an ellipsis, which gets me to thinking this kind of mental wandering will accompany the narrator back to the phone. Also, as I type this, I love that there isn’t a resolution to the hair appointment.
Thanks, Phillip! Mental wandering did accompany me back and there wasn’t a resolution to the hair appointment.
I really enjoyed this, as others have said, it’s a great progression. I particularly enjoyed “I quit panhandling time…”
My favorite line, too, Shaun.
What a good little sketch of American urban life. The opposite of sitting in a forest and pondering your bellybutton, the word choices and movement in your poem is immediate, worn, hard, human. Nice!
Thanks, Amy. Truly the opposite of forest!
how dependent we are on our phones,
seemingly helpless without them
Was a shock to my system!
I’m especially attracted to the “turn” in the fourth stanza that takes the reader from the familiar panic of losing this most important part of modern life, to an older, richer source of “waiting” and gazing–to discover the stories “pointed out” by what’s there.
Thanks, Greg. I saw it as an amazing opportunity to write a poem in my head– no phone notepad to use. Usually carry pen and paper but left it by the phone!
I like that there’s no earth to absorb the heat, no phone to absorb the attention.
That’s gorgeous.
I also like that we were just in sunset park, and now seeking shade in a streetlamp…but obviously it’s midday. It makes me happy imagining you in the wheel of time, perhaps it refers to everything moving on. The cell phone, though inciting some fear, seems less significant as the big wheel of time rolls on. Your writing is so subtle and thoughtful!
Agree! Truly was a wheel of time, Jerielle!