I See
One day I see
pale blue flashes,
neon blinking,
in the periphery
of a left eye.
The next day I see
delicate black lace
appear and disappear,
then a cobweb
quickly whisks away.
There are tiny black bubbles–
it’s as if a transparent surf
outlined in black
washes over my eye,
there and back
there and back
gone.
Another comet of white
light strays from an outer region.
At this age,
I decide to get it checked:
a tear in my teeny tiny retina,
immediate laser repair–
no time to think, say no.
I see green veins,
more flashes of
of light.
Why? Did I rub my eye too hard
with a fist? Too much swimming
in my friend’s over-chlorinated pool,
not wearing my silly blue goggles?
There is no reason the dr says–no exercise,
no fruit or vegetables, or one less sip of that drink
at the party that put you over the top
that could prevent this.
It is simply because
you are
“wiser”
I like this doctor.
I see.
I laugh.
It is simply because I am wiser.
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I enjoyed this, especially the visual language of the altered visions
Excellent descriptions! I had a retinal bleed so I understand this poem well!
scary!
Beautiful description of scary stuff!
Like:
delicate black lace
This doc is a keeper…knows one day he will be there too: you are
“wiser
Thanks for comments! I am still in shock — this happened this week!!!glad I could spin into poem!