If I live to be eighty
I want to be like Muriel.
She comes to the animal shelter
to love on cats. Some of them
are crooked, listing to one side,
slow in getting up, lying down,
but purring in the sun bathing
them through wide windows.
Muriel lists, too, all ninety pounds
of her. One shoulder sits lower
than the other, bones burst sharp
through skin embroidered with
wrinkles & dappled with age
spots, hair grey as oysters, pearled
with slivers of silver, a shaggy
moon in the making.
The shelter cats have faith
that food will come every morning,
every evening, that love will be
doled out by a variety of palms
& fingers & crooning voices,
that night & day will take turns.
Muriel has faith, too, that she will
amble in every Friday evening,
bend her tired body into sitting
on the floor, curl it around brown
tabbies & calicoes, sometimes nap
on cat beds, breath rising & falling
to the vibrato of felines vibrating
with contentedness.
If I live to be eighty, I want to wind
my way through the happy cats I’ve
held for hours, mosey out the shelter
door, & stroll to my car under the night
sky, imbibing the stars whose light
comes to us again & again.
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I really loved reading this. Love “skin embroidered with wrinkles and dappled with age”… and the ending is so lovely, especially “imbibing the stars who’se light comes to us again & again.”
Thank you!
I too love the description of the aging Muriel and the implicit idea that the cats have given so much back to her – as they do to you. The poem has much to say about time and even eternity.
Thank you, Nancy!
I love this woman. I hope she is real! Your observations are beautiful – “a shaggy/moon in the making.” How wonderful that both the woman and the cats get something from each other.
Yes, she is a real person! And thank you!
Such a wonderful cat lady story and so well written!
Thanks!
love this poem! So many favorite lines, especially these:
“hair grey as oysters, pearled
with slivers of silver, a shaggy
moon in the making.”
I might steal that phrase “a shaggy moon in the making” and start thinking of myself in that light as I age.
Thanks, Karen!
I loved this joyful and meditative poem
Thank you!
What a wonderful read.
The cats & Muriel & the narrator
threaded together by starlight
Thanks!