If You Look Real Close, You’d See It
Squint and ignore traffic’s steady line–
this picture-postcard–a neighborhood
bisected into little rows. What lies
beyond the fenceline brush is the crumbling
where-we-live, where the apartments fall
down around our necks, the factories
and shuttered old commercial buildings
looming over our apartment blocks
and rented homes.
Maybe I’ll always live
on this border, in this expensive place
of almost just enough, selling words
for less each year, adjusted
for the cost of inflation. I rise
to greet each morning with the view
of the brick wall outside my windows,
two blocks down from the detached
homes, greening in their sectioned yards.
13 thoughts on "If You Look Real Close, You’d See It"
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Great way of approaching large societal problems, such as inequality, in the context of a poem. A reminder that poets can look both inward and outward.
Someone, I don’t remember who, once told me that poems can make the political personal and the personal political and I loved that
I especially love “almost just enough, selling words for less each year”.
Thank you!
Powerful. I particularly liked the following with its line break and phrasing:
beyond the fenceline brush is the crumbling
where-we-live,
Thank you, Karen!
agree with aii
I really like:
…in this expensive place
of almost just enough
Thank you, Jim!
Your descriptions are incredible, Shaun!
Thanks so much, Nancy!
I can see this very well, & the point is well-made through these description.
Thank you <3
All of the above, Shaun.