If You Return
As the ice breaks on the pond
on a warm February Sunday,
the air delivering
floral hints of the future,
you and I stand and wait
for the car to arrive
that will take you away
to start your new life,
even if you do find a way back
for a visit, driven by nostalgia,
or a hope, it won’t be the same,
the cabin weathered by harsh dust
the grand maple gone.
I’ll have changed, too,
when you spot me
walking up the steep hill
to the road, so slow
and old by then
you’re sure to mistake me
for somebody else.
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Another pgotorealistic masterpiece…..
I can hear the wheels.onthe gravel.
All 5 senses and such clarity and concise.
I love the sound of your voice.
Looked up “pgotorealistic”, Coleman. Thanks for teaching a new word,
Thanks, bud.
Love “the cabin weathered by harsh dust ” and passage of time shown so well “so slow
and old by then /you’re sure to mistake me/for somebody else.”
Thanks, Pam!
This is great, Bill. You place us right next to you in each moment. Those last two stanzas land perfectly. Thanks for sharing this with us. I’ve really been enjoying your poetry this June. Keep ’em coming!
Appreciate that HA., I’m trying!
so sad and bittersweet
My thing, I’m afraid.
Loved the air delivered floral hints of the future
Thank you, Linda.
Way to break the heart, Bill! You do these feelings so tenderly and effortlessly.
I don’t often start out to write a sad poem, they just tend to turn that way. I am grateful for the comments!
I really like how the speaker becomes an item with “the cabin weathered by harsh dust/the grand maple gone./I’ll have changed, too…”
Thank you, Shaun.